Rought Cut of "Right Hand Hi'

I done a draft version with the whole video the same just with added narrative at the beginning of the video and the end, however it did not work out due to the quality of another camera i was using because i couldn't rent out the hard disc cam recorder as the renting days has expired and there wore no more available days to rent it out soon again.
The concept was that an ordinary girl was doing her homework and listening to music, as the next track comes on [Right Hand Hi by Kid Sister] she gets so inspired that she starts hallucinating that she is the artist of the songs and totally different compared to her original boring "geeky" ways. But the the song finished and she wakes up from her day dream and finds herself in the fabulous outfit she was in when she was daydreaming.
To get the shots of using the mac i recorded it using 'Screenflick, this program allows me to record anything i got on the mac. However there wore some issues that occurred throughout using this program, a lot of times some technical difficulties would occur to the program and the recordings would rapidly stop while playing back the clip, so i had to film it over and over again until it was right. Even thought a lot of time and work went into adding the narrative to the video i believe it looks so much better and professional without it, i also asked my teachers and they agreed with me so i took it out completely.

However an error occurred throughout uploading the video, so i couldn't upload the rough version.